Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)
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All right everyone, latest update is up! It is a bit short, but I've been thinking of putting more story into it and less sex now. I am thinking of changing the story up a bit and draw away from the sex a bit.
So I'll see what everyone has to say about it.
So I'll see what everyone has to say about it.
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Yayy new chapter.
I love Mark and Ashley's relationship. Devoted to each other and determined to make their dreams come true. If only all parents were like that.
About that hologram projection program, when will humanity develop one? Whenever that is waifu's will be 2D no more! (I mean a personal one, not a commercial Hatune Miku one)
I was expecting Jack to start kissing the hologram, then the story ended. lol.
EDIT: I dont mind that you write about less sex and more story as long as it doesnt turn into a really drawn out romantic drama kinda thing.
I love Mark and Ashley's relationship. Devoted to each other and determined to make their dreams come true. If only all parents were like that.
About that hologram projection program, when will humanity develop one? Whenever that is waifu's will be 2D no more! (I mean a personal one, not a commercial Hatune Miku one)
I was expecting Jack to start kissing the hologram, then the story ended. lol.
EDIT: I dont mind that you write about less sex and more story as long as it doesnt turn into a really drawn out romantic drama kinda thing.
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brok3n butterfly wrote...
Yayy new chapter. I love Mark and Ashley's relationship. Devoted to each other and determined to make their dreams come true. If only all parents were like that.
About that hologram projection program, when will humanity develop one? Whenever that is waifu's will be 2D no more! (I mean a personal one, not a commercial Hatune Miku one)
I was expecting Jack to start kissing the hologram, then the story ended. lol.
EDIT: I dont mind that you write about less sex and more story as long as it doesnt turn into a really drawn out romantic drama kinda thing.
I'm a big fan of technology and already waiting for such things to become public, Minority Report status. Already want an Omni-Tool myself!
Yeah, that's what I'm trying to avoid, at least have some sort of sexual contact between characters. So I'll split up the chapters, the whole number chapters will include a sex scene. The decimal chapters will include more of a storyline, sometimes I might just stick in both in a whole number depending on how my classes are going.
However, I will not be able to meet the weekly deadline I put up before.
At least not for the time being, I'll probably finish this by late November, early December or near the end of the year, depending on how everything goes on right now.
Edit: That's why I made the other story, to make it more romance drama, which I'm still thinking on how to progress through it. Might go back in a while for Halloween and add something new to "Crimson Rose" something like a tragedy or a horror story and rename the whole topic.
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Yama-kun wrote...
This thread has been dead in very long time now. I'm pretty busy with my personal life right now, especially with my classes. I will update it in mid-December and most likely finally finish off the whole story by the end of this year. So please, be patient. I apologize for any long waits, I do wish to continue, but not with what's going on right now.
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First of all, I would like to apologize. I said I would finish by the end of 2011 and did not. I was busy with my life and catching up with a lot of things and distracted by a lot of things. But now that I am free once again, I will finish off "Mommy's Boy", once I finish it, I will "revise" and fix the old chapters.
I thank you all for reading the series so far. I once again apologize for the delays, and hope you still read to the end.
I thank you all for reading the series so far. I once again apologize for the delays, and hope you still read to the end.