Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)
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brok3n butterfly wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Sure, as long there are new ideas, "Mommy's Boy" isn't going to go dry. How long has porn been around? I see alot of chapters in the future. Still loving the femdom sense that Ashley has. Since it is September and back to school season Ashley would make an interesting professor/advisor/etc. If I remember correctly its still summer vacation in this world right?
I take it youre constantly editing and stuff so I'm going to help a bit.
Spoiler:
I think thats all of them. Hope that helped. Keep it up Randomness
"Fist right across the fist" hmm... Wow, I guess Street Fighter is getting to my head.
Well timeline consistency shouldn't be a big deal, I just used summer vacation as an easy excuse for a lot of sex.
Thanks for the corrections and support, Brok3n, stuff like this I need to get rid of.
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Brok3n Butterfly made a Side-Story, I love it, hell of a way to get warm for the winter seasons!
Thanks for the contribution, Brok3n!
Thanks for the contribution, Brok3n!
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
DUDE! I completely forgot! You wrote "Mrs. Madison" as "Mrs. Robinson" near the end of Chapter 8. Which is it?
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Wow, that was an awesome story from brok3n. It almost felt like your style Random, but I could definitely tell someone else wrote it. :3
Still, was a very good flashback chapter.
Still, was a very good flashback chapter.
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artcellrox wrote...
DUDE! I completely forgot! You wrote "Mrs. Madison" as "Mrs. Robinson" near the end of Chapter 8. Which is it?I searched for it and found it right now lol, wow, why are these horrible typos popping up? Why are you betraying me, Dustin Hoffman! WHY?!
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Yama-kun wrote...
I'm waiting for the next chapter. My boner is dying for some more!I'll post it up later today, I couldn't access Fakku to the full extents due to being busy and having some visitors over.
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ALL RIGHT! Chapter 9 is up! Hope everyone enjoys reading it and finds satisfaction from it! I also apologize by not putting it up last night.
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Another Chapter on DP! Man, that was almost as good as the first one, but still got the job done. :3
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brok3n butterfly wrote...
Is that foreshadowing I see there? xDAnother great chapter! Keep the "balls" rolling!
Yep, planning on using a resort as the grand finale. Thanks for your continuing support, Brok3n!
New chapter out guys! Hope you all enjoy it!
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"put on of my toys"
should be one, not on
""No, sill! All of these.."
forgot a y in silly
""she takes off my.."
don't need the "
Other than that, awesome! Pure awesome!
should be one, not on
""No, sill! All of these.."
forgot a y in silly
""she takes off my.."
don't need the "
Other than that, awesome! Pure awesome!
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Thanks for the continuing support, everyone!
I added a side-story that Yama-Kun made, it's a very fun read.
Thanks for the contribution Yama-Kun!
If anyone else wants to go ahead and make a side-story or fan-fiction, go ahead! I encourage it too!
I added a side-story that Yama-Kun made, it's a very fun read.
Thanks for the contribution Yama-Kun!
If anyone else wants to go ahead and make a side-story or fan-fiction, go ahead! I encourage it too!