Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)

Oh yeah! "Maid" would DEFINITELY work as well. And if you do use Teacher/Student, have Van Halen's Hot For Teacher play in the background. :P



Reread Chapter 4, because it got edited to fit the new direction as well. Specifically, the last part.

Also, suggest something to the guy! He wants to know what type of sex-play we'd like to see next! :D

Yep, what Art said. Suggest anything you want, Brok3n.

So...where are you?

Making one chapter right now lol

New chapter! Hope everyone enjoys it!

Sorry for the delay, class is about to start and I've been getting ready this past week. So expect at least a chapter a week or the usual two chapters if I'm not that busy. I've also been toying with the idea of making another story and it won't be anything similar to this. Again, sorry for the delay and hope you enjoy the new chapter!

Another great chapter! Got me rushing to bathroom again. :P

One thing I may suggest, if possible, is making the scenes a little longer. I see that detail isn't your main style, so see if you can compensate that with length.

The more enjoyment one gets out of it the better!

I will try to extend the scenes out, I've got to improve on my style and that is one way.

However, classes are going to be in session soon for me and might be a bit more busier than normal. I will vouch and try to update it twice a week. I am also working on another story like I said before and see how that turns out.



I'm going to take your idea for BDSM a bit later brok3n, if you don't mind. I plan on using Rachel a bit later and as a conclusion. As for Veronica being a "daughter" it's all meant for fun and to add a bit of a friendship/relationship between them all. I will read Nana later on, thanks for the suggestion!

Again, thanks to you two for reading and for enjoying it!

Yayyy chapter 6 is outt. Ashley's character fits REALLY well into a femdom teacher role, gotta love it. I'm very interested in these machines mentioned in this chapter. Foreshadowing on their use at some point in the future??

Two updates a week huh? Awesome. Keep it up but dont push yourself too much.
Quality > quantity

I might use the machine if given a chance throughout the story.

I plan on updating this story and Crimson Rose once a week, most likely on the weekends. I'll try for two updates a week, but like you said, Quality is far better.

"Ashley: I know you have more in you, you motherfucker! Come on! Give momma more of your sperm! Give me and my tits a good spray!"

I lol'd,... I love this, it's just like a roleplay. Sexy every second, keep it coming.

Thanks for the input Yama-kun!

Also, is there any sort of fetish or something specific you would like to see? Well, read in this case.

Quote the people directly to get their immediate attention. I doubt he'll come back to the thread for any reason other than reading the story itself.

I sent a PM, though, don't worry. :)

I did it at first to warn people, but I thought it would get annoying to people if they saw a quote every time I posted. I will get used again to quoting, thanks Art.

Don't get too used to it. Only quote people directly if you have something to personally ask them about the story.

Double penetration. Jack and a friend having fun with his mother.

also about her telling about her past having sex with other younger males.

Sounds good, for the DP, do you mind if I use a strap-on for a girl?

I like to see how ashely will act to another guys 'thing'

I'll come up with something for sure later on then.

New chapter and new style! Also made a foreshadow for the next part. Hope everyone enjoys it!

Another great chapter. This new style is actually pretty interesting. Makes the whole thing look cleaner. Can't wait to see how DP works out. Should be hot.

Speaking of which, where's Jack's dad?