Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)
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"Oh, I can't wait!" +1!
Yes. Father-son DP sounds good. To add the hospital thing to it:
"Surgeon Jack enters the room and consults with his father and Head Doctor, Mark. Ashley sterilizes the men's throbbing 'tools' in preparation for the procedure. Veronica is lying on the operating table....."
gah...now I have to wait a week. Randomness would you mind if I wrote a side-story or something using your characters? I dont know if I actually will or not yet but I'd like to get your permission before I get any ideas.
artcellrox wrote...
Speaking of which, where's Jack's dad?Yes. Father-son DP sounds good. To add the hospital thing to it:
"Surgeon Jack enters the room and consults with his father and Head Doctor, Mark. Ashley sterilizes the men's throbbing 'tools' in preparation for the procedure. Veronica is lying on the operating table....."
gah...now I have to wait a week. Randomness would you mind if I wrote a side-story or something using your characters? I dont know if I actually will or not yet but I'd like to get your permission before I get any ideas.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
brok3n butterfly wrote...
"Oh, I can't wait!" +1!artcellrox wrote...
Speaking of which, where's Jack's dad?"Surgeon Jack enters the room and consults with his father and Head Doctor, Mark. Ashley sterilizes the men's throbbing 'tools' in preparation for the procedure. Veronica is lying on the operating table....."
PLEASE! Find a way to implement this scenario! :D
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artcellrox wrote...
Another great chapter. This new style is actually pretty interesting. Makes the whole thing look cleaner. Can't wait to see how DP works out. Should be hot.Speaking of which, where's Jack's dad?
I never thought of implementing a dad. I just thought it would sound weird. That looks like it will change now.
brok3n butterfly wrote...
"Oh, I can't wait!" +1!artcellrox wrote...
Speaking of which, where's Jack's dad?Yes. Father-son DP sounds good. To add the hospital thing to it:
"Surgeon Jack enters the room and consults with his father and Head Doctor, Mark. Ashley sterilizes the men's throbbing 'tools' in preparation for the procedure. Veronica is lying on the operating table....."
gah...now I have to wait a week. Randomness would you mind if I wrote a side-story or something using your characters? I dont know if I actually will or not yet but I'd like to get your permission before I get any ideas.
A foursome sounds good, along with the doctor scenario.
Sure thing, Brok3n Butterfly, you can go ahead and make a fan chapter/side-story if you like. You can use the characters if you want to, the only restriction I have is Rachel, whom I haven't included at all into the story yet. Besides that, you can use the current characters and even create the dad himself.
Thanks a lot for the support and viewings, Art and Brok3n!
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I just love Ashleys personality how she loves just to fucked by her son. I'm so excited to see her reaction to her friend having another male inside her ass or pussy. HNNNNNGGG...I even love this Chapter. It's better than the previous one, keep it up. Make it more hotter and hotter.
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Yama-kun wrote...
I just love Ashleys personality how she loves just to fucked by her son. I'm so excited to see her reaction to her friend having another male inside her ass or pussy. HNNNNNGGG...I even love this Chapter. It's better than the previous one, keep it up. Make it more hotter and hotter.Good to see that you're loving the series Yama-kun! Reader satisfaction is the thing I am for! Just one question about the DP, do you mind if the dad joins in?
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The Randomness wrote...
Yama-kun wrote...
I just love Ashleys personality how she loves just to fucked by her son. I'm so excited to see her reaction to her friend having another male inside her ass or pussy. HNNNNNGGG...I even love this Chapter. It's better than the previous one, keep it up. Make it more hotter and hotter.Good to see that you're loving the series Yama-kun! Reader satisfaction is the thing I am for! Just one question about the DP, do you mind if the dad joins in?
How about in another story. I really wanna see this mother handle another young boys Dick
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Yama-kun wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Yama-kun wrote...
I just love Ashleys personality how she loves just to fucked by her son. I'm so excited to see her reaction to her friend having another male inside her ass or pussy. HNNNNNGGG...I even love this Chapter. It's better than the previous one, keep it up. Make it more hotter and hotter.Good to see that you're loving the series Yama-kun! Reader satisfaction is the thing I am for! Just one question about the DP, do you mind if the dad joins in?
How about in another story. I really wanna see this mother handle another young boys Dick
For sure, I'll keep that in mind.
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All right, new chapter! Now with double penetration!
Sorry guys, I didn't expect all this homework from my classes this semester, but I'll be clear for next week.
Hope you all enjoy it!
Sorry guys, I didn't expect all this homework from my classes this semester, but I'll be clear for next week.
Hope you all enjoy it!
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Another hot chapter. With Robin on board, we should see some more threesomes in the future.
Loved the little Kinnikuman joke, if that's what it was?
Loved the little Kinnikuman joke, if that's what it was?
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If Robin is going to spend his time there. Then I have a feeling that it's going to be another chapter with him. awesome...love this chapter.
The DP scene was a bit short. It should have been longer.
The DP scene was a bit short. It should have been longer.
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artcellrox wrote...
Another hot chapter. With Robin on board, we should see some more threesomes in the future.Loved the little Kinnikuman joke, if that's what it was?
Correct, I'm a big fan of Kinnikuman and Robin Mask along with Brocken Jr. are my top three favorite characters.
Yama-kun wrote...
If Robin is going to spend his time there. Then I have a feeling that it's going to be another chapter with him. awesome...love this chapter.The DP scene was a bit short. It should have been longer.
I'm going to try to add some more detail to the scene one of these days, so check by Wednesday night.
Glad to see you two enjoyed it.
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Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.
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Zandorf wrote...
Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.Glad to have another person enjoying the story!
As long as Veronica doesn't end up pregnant, then yes.
I intend on having Jack end up with Rachel in the end.
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The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.Glad to have another person enjoying the story!
As long as Veronica doesn't end up pregnant, then yes.
I intend on having Jack end up with Rachel in the end.
It's good then. I just hope there are quite some more chapters before Jack trances off with Rachel. :3
And no, one person getting pregnant would ruin the story. :3
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Zandorf wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.Glad to have another person enjoying the story!
As long as Veronica doesn't end up pregnant, then yes.
I intend on having Jack end up with Rachel in the end.
It's good then. I just hope there are quite some more chapters before Jack trances off with Rachel. :3
And no, one person getting pregnant would ruin the story. :3
Don't worry, there are several ideas left. I'm also giving people a chance to suggest something they would like to see! Well, read in this case.
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The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.Glad to have another person enjoying the story!
As long as Veronica doesn't end up pregnant, then yes.
I intend on having Jack end up with Rachel in the end.
It's good then. I just hope there are quite some more chapters before Jack trances off with Rachel. :3
And no, one person getting pregnant would ruin the story. :3
Don't worry, there are several ideas left. I'm also giving people a chance to suggest something they would like to see! Well, read in this case.
Cool. I look forward to it. And I might have some more ideas, as the story progresses. :3
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Zandorf wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
Zandorf wrote...
Simple style, carries a big punch. Heck, I came three times just reading the 4th chapter where Veronica came into the scene. I really did. I love this type of incestual relationship. The forbidden of the forbidden, I would like to call it. And now that Veronica is Jack's sister, is there a small chance of Jack coming inside of Veronica, during one of her "safe" days? Just my opinion.Glad to have another person enjoying the story!
As long as Veronica doesn't end up pregnant, then yes.
I intend on having Jack end up with Rachel in the end.
It's good then. I just hope there are quite some more chapters before Jack trances off with Rachel. :3
And no, one person getting pregnant would ruin the story. :3
Don't worry, there are several ideas left. I'm also giving people a chance to suggest something they would like to see! Well, read in this case.
Cool. I look forward to it. And I might have some more ideas, as the story progresses. :3
Sure, as long there are new ideas, "Mommy's Boy" isn't going to go dry.
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The Randomness wrote...
Sure, as long there are new ideas, "Mommy's Boy" isn't going to go dry. How long has porn been around? I see alot of chapters in the future. Still loving the femdom sense that Ashley has. Since it is September and back to school season Ashley would make an interesting professor/advisor/etc. If I remember correctly its still summer vacation in this world right?
I take it youre constantly editing and stuff so I'm going to help a bit.
Spoiler:
I think thats all of them. Hope that helped. Keep it up Randomness