After Rain by Parabola
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After Rain

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18 pages
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The pain of kneeling makes my heart moist…
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GODsHandOnEarth
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 6:09 am)
+9 points
Interrogations by fucking don't seem to be that effective as at the end you couldn't really tell who broke whom...

(Normally I would also ask for a sequel, but Eddie is worried about me so I'm going to the sequellers anonymous and can't ask for one...)

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EddieBeInBeddie
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 6:30 am)
+6 points
(Makes the 'my eyes, on you gesture to GHoE, nods emphatically.)
GODsHandOnEarth
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 7:16 am)
+6 points
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I've seen people there... One of them asked for another Transformers sequel... This was the moment I realized I had to change...
GODsHandOnEarth
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 11:34 pm)
+4 points
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@Tskune_702 it's forbidden to bring your own snacks and drinks to the show, you need to buy everything either from Eddie or me...
Tskune_702
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 11:19 pm)
+3 points
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-sits in chair and pulls out popcorn- Don't mind me Eddie. You and GHOE have been my entertainment for that last few weeks. Do continue.
Tskune_702
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 11:48 pm)
+3 points
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I never bought these. I found them in a trash can. Some chick threw them at me and called me DeWitty or something.
EddieBeInBeddie
(Sun Nov 27, 2016, 1:36 am)
+2 points
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Don't encourage us, Tskune, we're bad enough on our own...

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Shiroyama
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 8:43 am)
+4 points
I'm glad you're getting help. We're here for you in your time of need.
GODsHandOnEarth
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 9:54 am)
+3 points
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Thank you, this means a lot to me...
SirDougles
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 12:31 pm)
+3 points
Good. It is a safe place where no one will judge you. And you've already completed the first step in admitting you have a problem. Now we can begin to heal.
RalgradxF
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 2:20 pm)
+2 points
Pretty sure what broke the guy here was his feelings for Ayaka and his mortification for himself and his actions.

Also, what SirDougles said. And Shiroyama. We got chur back! I mean, if there really is a problem...
MHM-Dono
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 6:03 pm)
+3 points
THIS ... is ... Vanilla?
Tskune_702
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 11:20 pm)
+3 points
About as vanilla as chocolate milk...
Recent Comments
Genryuusai
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 8:27 pm)
+1 points
The way she calls for him on page 15 got me "Hnnng..."
Xelgadis
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 5:37 pm)
+1 points
This really isn't Vanilla. It's more forced than anything. It might be Vanilla in the future though.
Neah1987
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 5:20 pm)
+1 points
Needs a sequel where he confesses to her, and they start going out.
Juanmotime
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 3:22 pm)
+2 points
Reading GHoE's admission has made me realize that in my short time as a member of Fakku, I'm developing the same problem... But I really wanna ask for one!!!
Juanmotime
(Sun Nov 27, 2016, 9:19 am)
I'm trying...but with every new story read, it opens up the door to what we are trying to stop doing.. why's it gotta be this way??!
Juanmotime
(Sun Nov 27, 2016, 9:23 am)
+1 points
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I have no idea on how to post comments as I've never done this before. Where can I get help??
GODsHandOnEarth
(Sun Nov 27, 2016, 12:42 am)
+2 points
Fight the urge!
SirDougles
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 12:30 pm)
+1 points
Not quite sure how I feel about this one. Reverse mind break is an interesting concept that might be worth exploring?
RalgradxF
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 2:47 pm)
+1 points
Depends on how you define "reverse mind break" for this one. Technically, she didn't break him. It's closer to him breaking under the realization of the situation at hand, while using her as an outlet for his fear, desperation, frustration, and denial. Which only breaks him further; his own doing.

Usually in mind break pieces, the person doing the mind-breaking takes something(s) precious from the victim and they come undone as result. In this case, it was more like him realizing and dealing with the fact that what/who he wanted was already taken from him. That and shame over his own actions in the face of this is ultimately what brought him to a standstill.

The chicky in this piece was just in love with him and used his feelings in order to have her "intimate moment" with him. In a sense, you could say she was desperate too.
animefreak_usa
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 10:07 am)
+1 points
My boner is confused. Well more than it was before.
ElPsyCongroo
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 7:35 am)
+1 points
this one gave me a feeling so complicated.
AssasinZAssasin
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 7:29 am)
+1 points
Ah...Sex interrogation, such a classic.
I felt he was maybe being a bit forceful, but it seems it's what she actually really wanted, and also it seemed to have ended quite nicely, so I guess it was completely fine.
RalgradxF
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 3:01 pm)
+1 points
I wouldn't say completely fine. I mean, does her daring him count as consent? Because if not, he technically raped her...I mean she wanted it, but the question is, did he realize that from the get-go? I don't think it was established clearly enough, is all I'm saying. Also, the guy is still heartbroken, but upside is Shizumine still loves him and seems to have helped him accept his loss just a little bit in the end...no clue if that will progress. Only other "fine" I could think of, assuming based on one's perspective, is that she's not pressing any charges...but again, debatable.
EddieBeInBeddie
(Sat Nov 26, 2016, 6:12 am)
+1 points
Parabola? Rapidly becoming a near instafav artist.