Deft-Monkey wrote...
I voted story. Anyone can make great art with a lot of practice, but story is something that you really need to take time to think over and it's what separates the good doujins and the better doujins for me.
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I have to agree with what Deft Monkey said. In addition, if its a doujin based off of a preexisting series like Naruto or Bleach, I like it when it seems as though the story presented within the doujin could actually take place within the larger story, (ex: Hinata Fight, Shinigami Ladies).