Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)

A sister eh? Hm, there is bound to be a way to get one in. Inspirational wise, it is a bit empty, but I'll try.

I read some of the stories in Literotica and wow, I read some damn good stuff there. The detail is never-ending and amazing, thanks for the link there, Brok3n Butterfly!

Thanks for the support and glad you're enjoying the story!

All right guys! Chapter 4 is up! Now added a new character into the mix and going to add another one later! Hope you enjoy reading it!

Well, you've done it again! This time, I actually "relieved" myself to it! XD

Nice job once again. Eager to see what you have in store for the rest of the characters and the Sex Wrestling arc.

One thing I noticed, is that you're quite concise and brief in your style, instead of detailed, like most other lemon and erotic writers.

I'm flattered to hear/read that.

I don't know if it's a good or bad thing about being brief, been thinking of heading into more detail. But it comes from reading comics/manga/hentai, where one panel changes to the next.

Hey, it's your style. If you feel it does your work justice, no need to risk changing it.

I also notice, I seem to be one of your few fans. :P

True, can't argue with that.

I wouldn't doubt it if some people are a bit reluctant to read the story due to it being incest, but I don't mind.

I'm writing this story for fun and I always wanted to write some erotic fiction. Most of this stuff comes from my dreams, I added a story to make it a bit more significant. However, I might add one of my dreams, no-holds barred later on.

Thanks for being a fan, artcellrox, I truly appreciate it.

All right everyone, Chapter 5 is out!

Once again, first to comment on the new chapter! :)

This one was OK, to be honest. It may be my own fault though, as I expected you to jump straight into the wrestling. Plus, it was a TEENSY bit short on the sex and variety (and I'm not really a fan of pegging). :P

Still, these sort of arcs happens, so just keep doing what you do best, and hopefully the magic will renew. :)

Can't argue with you there, I might change the story and take out the wrestling. I don't think it's going to work out. I'll try making sketches, if it doesn't work out, I'll just go back to the romance story.

Sketches? You draw?

Whoops, didn't mean to draw. Forgot to state "lack for a better term" there. I did rough drafts over the day and couldn't find anything worth it, just going to keep on going with having Jack hook up with Rachel after all.

Aww, come on, explore a little more. I feel like hooking up with Rachel might end "encounters" with Ashley. And let's face it, you end it with a MILF, there's something wrong with you. :P

I'm not going to just shove Rachel in, it's going to be a steady integration, there might be ONE encounter with her, but that will be saved until the end.

Did you take down the new chapter? I was looking for it when I saw this thread updated

Yeah, I deleted it. Gonna make a different chapter 5, sorry.

I noticed the change you did. You seem to definitely be putting more emphasis on the sex and relationships than that Wresting Arc. Let's see how this goes now.

All right! The NEW Chapter 5 is out! Hope you enjoy it!

I will also like to know what kind of role-playing and other type of sex games you guys would like to recommend!

That's the spirit! This new one DEFINITELY got me hard. You've got your flow back. Waiting for more now. :D

Update the title of the thread to let people know you're taking a new direction.

EDIT: Forgot to mention! :P

I'm more into nurse/doctor-patient play, but feel free to use whatever you want. I'm not into bondage a lot, so you'll have to see what others say about that.

As long as my readers are satisfied and having fun reading the story! Just had to do something about the old chapter and thank goodness this one worked out! I agree, It gets a bit "hard" to write at times. I'll take your suggestion of Nurse/Doctor role-play, some of my favorites have always been Teacher/Student and Maid/Servant. Any suggestions are welcome!

I read the first three lines and thought "fuck my school doesnt offer sexology"

Im interested in where you're going to take Veronica. Specifically about what Ashley meant by daughter and signing papers..unless I'm missing something big here.

EDIT: Ohhh I see now you edited chapter 4 as well. Im interested in how youre going to do the S&M parts. If youre looking for inspiration I would recommend this manga (Nana to Kaoru). Ignore the storyline parts of it...not that the story is bad.

Right now I had this idea. Professor Jack and his Assistant Ashley are professors for BDSM1311. Its the first day of class and Veronica and Rachel are about the learn "the ropes" of their new elective.

Quoting you for the bump.