Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)
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WARNING: THE FOLLOWING STORIES ARE ABOUT INCEST!
Setting: The world is a sort of utopia, crimes hardly get made and sex is everywhere and legal, no diseases or anything. Idealistic, but the story is supposed to be lighthearted.
Jack: Age: 20, 6'3, short dark hair, goes to Green Metropolis State and gets nervous around his mom a lot.
Ashley: Age: 39, long dark hair, works for "In The Pink" and is Toy Director for the corporation.
** (Asterisks/Stars) Will be used for actions
() Parentheses will be used for thoughts and thinking
NOTE: I AM LOOKING FOR CRITICISM ON MY WRITING, SO PLEASE, IF YOU FIND ANY MISTAKE IN GRAMMAR OR SENTENCE STRUCTURE OR ANY SORT OF MISTAKE, PLEASE POINT IT OUT!
CHAPTER 1: THE "FAMILY"
CHAPTER 2: AFTER-SEX
CHAPTER 3: Take Charge... Damn it!
CHAPTER 4: Double
CHAPTER 5- Back to Basics
Chapter 6- Class is in Session
Chapter 7: A Maid in Need
CHAPTER 8- The Doctor and Patient are Going In
Brok3n Butterfly's Side-Story: Best Present for a Couple
Chapter 9: Well, this got deep...
Chapter 10: About your job...
Yama-Kun's Side-Story: Sharing is Caring
Chapter 11: Hey honey!
Chapter 12: Family Fun
Chapter 12.5: Intermission
Chapter 13: At Work (IN PROGRESS)
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"I got the camera ready, dad is going to film us both, is that okay?" Mom asked, I was sitting in a chair, with just a jock strap. We were in a very sensual room, everything was made of silk and felt good to touch, easy to see why. "It's okay, I feel more relaxed I guess." I answer, she comes out the door in a very sexy outfit, a blue elegant dress going all the way to her butt, highlighting her huge cleavage. I immediately get a boner and slips out of the jock strap. She giggles, "Relax young man, we are still not ready to do the scene." she orders. "Uh yeah, sorry, hehe!" I say nervously. A few moments later dad comes to the room, just wearing his casual wear. He gives me a nice suit to go along with the theme, it's navy blue with a tie to go along with it. "All right, the theme is a formal party, you two just came back and are very horny." he says, "Sounds simple, anything else?" I ask. "Just go fucking wild." He nods to me.
A few moments later
Setting: The world is a sort of utopia, crimes hardly get made and sex is everywhere and legal, no diseases or anything. Idealistic, but the story is supposed to be lighthearted.
Jack: Age: 20, 6'3, short dark hair, goes to Green Metropolis State and gets nervous around his mom a lot.
Ashley: Age: 39, long dark hair, works for "In The Pink" and is Toy Director for the corporation.
** (Asterisks/Stars) Will be used for actions
() Parentheses will be used for thoughts and thinking
NOTE: I AM LOOKING FOR CRITICISM ON MY WRITING, SO PLEASE, IF YOU FIND ANY MISTAKE IN GRAMMAR OR SENTENCE STRUCTURE OR ANY SORT OF MISTAKE, PLEASE POINT IT OUT!
CHAPTER 1: THE "FAMILY"
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 2: AFTER-SEX
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 3: Take Charge... Damn it!
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 4: Double
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 5- Back to Basics
Spoiler:
Chapter 6- Class is in Session
Spoiler:
Chapter 7: A Maid in Need
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 8- The Doctor and Patient are Going In
Spoiler:
Brok3n Butterfly's Side-Story: Best Present for a Couple
Spoiler:
Chapter 9: Well, this got deep...
Spoiler:
Chapter 10: About your job...
Spoiler:
Yama-Kun's Side-Story: Sharing is Caring
Spoiler:
Chapter 11: Hey honey!
Spoiler:
Chapter 12: Family Fun
Spoiler:
Chapter 12.5: Intermission
Spoiler:
Chapter 13: At Work (IN PROGRESS)
[spoil]
"I got the camera ready, dad is going to film us both, is that okay?" Mom asked, I was sitting in a chair, with just a jock strap. We were in a very sensual room, everything was made of silk and felt good to touch, easy to see why. "It's okay, I feel more relaxed I guess." I answer, she comes out the door in a very sexy outfit, a blue elegant dress going all the way to her butt, highlighting her huge cleavage. I immediately get a boner and slips out of the jock strap. She giggles, "Relax young man, we are still not ready to do the scene." she orders. "Uh yeah, sorry, hehe!" I say nervously. A few moments later dad comes to the room, just wearing his casual wear. He gives me a nice suit to go along with the theme, it's navy blue with a tie to go along with it. "All right, the theme is a formal party, you two just came back and are very horny." he says, "Sounds simple, anything else?" I ask. "Just go fucking wild." He nods to me.
A few moments later
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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
One thing I can say... is...
I've been told a lot that my writing is like a drama script... but wow, yours is even more script-like. XD
I still enjoyed it nonetheless.
I've been told a lot that my writing is like a drama script... but wow, yours is even more script-like. XD
I still enjoyed it nonetheless.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Hot...
Keep 'em coming! I'm loving this already! :D
But what do you mean by "not incest"? That was some pretty clear and explicit "mother-loving".
Keep 'em coming! I'm loving this already! :D
But what do you mean by "not incest"? That was some pretty clear and explicit "mother-loving".
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mibuchiha wrote...
One thing I can say... is...I've been told a lot that my writing is like a drama script... but wow, yours is even more script-like. XD
I still enjoyed it nonetheless.
Thanks and glad you enjoyed it! I just got used to this style from reading comic books and manga.
artcellrox wrote...
Hot...Keep 'em coming! I'm loving this already! :D
But what do you mean by "not incest"? That was some pretty clear and explicit "mother-loving".
Glad you love it and thanks for the support! I'll change it to incest then haha. It's just that it is a touchy subject, but hey, it's a fiction and there is no harm done.
I'll be making another chapter later this week, so stay tuned!
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
This is Fakku! There are quite some incestuous material fans here, as far as I know. But don't lose the setting. It sounds pretty interesting in its own right. And like you said, the story is meant to be light-hearted, so try to do what you feel is right.
Plus, you misspelled "read" in your signature. It says "ready". :P
Plus, you misspelled "read" in your signature. It says "ready". :P
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artcellrox wrote...
This is Fakku! There are quite some incestuous material fans here, as far as I know. But don't lose the setting. It sounds pretty interesting in its own right. And like you said, the story is meant to be light-hearted, so try to do what you feel is right.Plus, you misspelled "read" in your signature. It says "ready". :P
Ouch, hell of a typo!
My main influences comes from my dreams mostly. The utopia setting exists due to my idealism.
I myself am an incest fan, the dreams say it all. Possibilities are endless and my imagination never stops working.
Thanks for the inputs.
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artcellrox wrote...
So when can we expect the next chapter?For sure, I will update the story every weekend. If I have the time, I will also update it in the middle of the week.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Another amazing and hot chapter! Keep up the kinky! :D
But seriously, that was pretty good, so keep it up. Honestly, after reading Eien (got uploaded here today), I really needed some incestuous MILF loving.
One thing, though. Wasn't Ashley supposed to be a blonde?
But seriously, that was pretty good, so keep it up. Honestly, after reading Eien (got uploaded here today), I really needed some incestuous MILF loving.
One thing, though. Wasn't Ashley supposed to be a blonde?
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artcellrox wrote...
Another amazing and hot chapter! Keep up the kinky! :DBut seriously, that was pretty good, so keep it up. Honestly, after reading Eien (got uploaded here today), I really needed some incestuous MILF loving.
One thing, though. Wasn't Ashley supposed to be a blonde?
Thanks!
You are correct, I changed it to brunette due to personal preference. I can change it back to blonde if you like.
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The Randomness wrote...
WARNING: THE FOLLOWING STORIES ARE ABOUT INCEST! Setting: The world is a sort of utopia, crimes hardly get made and sex is everywhere and legal, no diseases or anything. Idealistic, but the story is supposed to be lighthearted.
Jack: Age: 20, 6'3, short dark hair, goes to Green Metropolis State and gets nervous around his mom a lot.
Ashley: Age: 39, long dark hair, works for "In The Pink" and is Toy Director for the corporation.
nice job
** (Asterisks/Stars) Will be used for actions
() Parentheses will be used for thoughts and thinking
NOTE: I AM LOOKING FOR CRITICISM ON MY WRITING, SO PLEASE, IF YOU FIND ANY MISTAKE IN GRAMMAR OR SENTENCE STRUCTURE OR ANY SORT OF MISTAKE, PLEASE POINT IT OUT!
CHAPTER 1: THE "FAMILY"
Spoiler:
CHAPTER 1 END
CHAPTER 2: AFTER-SEX
Spoiler:
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
The Randomness wrote...
artcellrox wrote...
Another amazing and hot chapter! Keep up the kinky! :DBut seriously, that was pretty good, so keep it up. Honestly, after reading Eien (got uploaded here today), I really needed some incestuous MILF loving.
One thing, though. Wasn't Ashley supposed to be a blonde?
Thanks!
You are correct, I changed it to brunette due to personal preference. I can change it back to blonde if you like.
It's your call. It's just, when it was blonde, I had this crazy picture in my head that Ashley looked like Yasuko Takasu from Toradora, for some reason. :P
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artcellrox wrote...
The Randomness wrote...
artcellrox wrote...
Another amazing and hot chapter! Keep up the kinky! :DBut seriously, that was pretty good, so keep it up. Honestly, after reading Eien (got uploaded here today), I really needed some incestuous MILF loving.
One thing, though. Wasn't Ashley supposed to be a blonde?
Thanks!
You are correct, I changed it to brunette due to personal preference. I can change it back to blonde if you like.
It's your call. It's just, when it was blonde, I had this crazy picture in my head that Ashley looked like Yasuko Takasu from Toradora, for some reason. :P
I chose dark hair due to my inspirations. But a better idea is to imagine Ashley however we see fit, win-win situation.
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artcellrox
The Grey Knight :y
Keep going! Keep going! You're doing awesome! :D
Bring the waitress in next for a threesome before you continue the story.
Unfortunately, due to circumstances, I'll have to stop posting on Fakku for a while. I'll be back some time later, so you better have a lot of chapters ready!
Bring the waitress in next for a threesome before you continue the story.
Unfortunately, due to circumstances, I'll have to stop posting on Fakku for a while. I'll be back some time later, so you better have a lot of chapters ready!
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artcellrox wrote...
Keep going! Keep going! You're doing awesome! :DBring the waitress in next for a threesome before you continue the story.
Unfortunately, due to circumstances, I'll have to stop posting on Fakku for a while. I'll be back some time later, so you better have a lot of chapters ready!
Glad to see you're enjoying them!
I tried to bring out another character, but needed a sort of intro to them. I want to implement Rachel in the story, but I would rather make it an extravagant entrance. I'll be sure to have several chapters soon!
Thanks for your continuing support and hope you come back soon!
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Nice. Its the first time I laughed when someone said "motherfucker". Jack's personality makes me feel like he's a harem character. I wonder if he has sisters...(hint hint). Looking forward to next chapter. Also you could upload these to Literotica which has thousands of similar stories.